Delicious images running through my mind…. Don’t really know if it was meant to sound that way 🙂
It was meant to be something else. But I am glad that it can invoke other feelings too. 🙂
Wow. This makes me feel sad. I think this is the beauty of haiku. It invokes different feelings in different people.
It was meant to make people feel for her. At least in my head.
Glad you liked it. 🙂
But you know feeling for her could be different. In my mind, she was someone who was there due to circumstances, but the commentator above felt the joy and beauty of their release.
And I wonder if you had an altogether different image in your mind?!
And you are spot on! A woman trapped by circumstances, waiting for passions of chauvinists to get over. Waiting for everything to get over.
But interpretations can be many. A dot to us could be a a flying saucer in the sky to someone else. 🙂
Delicious images running through my mind…. Don’t really know if it was meant to sound that way 🙂
It was meant to be something else. But I am glad that it can invoke other feelings too. 🙂
Wow. This makes me feel sad. I think this is the beauty of haiku. It invokes different feelings in different people.
It was meant to make people feel for her. At least in my head.
Glad you liked it. 🙂
But you know feeling for her could be different. In my mind, she was someone who was there due to circumstances, but the commentator above felt the joy and beauty of their release.
And I wonder if you had an altogether different image in your mind?!
And you are spot on! A woman trapped by circumstances, waiting for passions of chauvinists to get over. Waiting for everything to get over.
But interpretations can be many. A dot to us could be a a flying saucer in the sky to someone else. 🙂